Basically, sort of. Punctuation is still messy but that's more of an admin task. I'd like to tidy up the transitions between scenes and maybe squeeze a bit more humour in, but if I'm unprepared to move on until I'm 100% happy, I might never start chapter 2. So I'm going to leave it for now, stamp it as complete and probably return to it in the future with fresh eyes.
After typing the above I went and changed a load of stuff, I've also remembered a bit about Amanda and Mort and a dragons talon that I've left at work. Bit annoying.
Here's a picture of lead lab researcher, Amanda
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