Cracking on with chapter 2 and already things are coming apart at the seems. Plotholes are creeping in and I don't know what to do about them, a chunk of story about an expedition to a cave isn't fitting as well as I'd hoped and....ARGH THE PLOTHOLES. Most specifically, something I really wanted this book to do was gradually show what a badass Oak is...but straight away I'm establishing that he got his position in the society by overthrowing an entire criminal organisation. If I bin that idea, loads of other plot points don't work. WHAT SHOULD I DO!?
Oh well, I came up with the "soggy
retort of lukewarm vanilla" so it's not all bad.
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